adelaide
futuristic rapunzel, scared of everything, memory jumper, mentally abused
Childhood: Raised by Fawn (see below)
Dream: Freedom (traveling the world, going to The Outside)
Fears: EVERYTHING; this is her biggest problem!! She’s afraid to stand up for herself or to change her life. Also terrified of the unknown.
Flaws: Cowardly. Won’t stand up for what’s right. Selfish, ultimately. Sees herself as a victim; she could try to change her state but she’s given up. Negative.
Strengths: Empathetic. Insightful. Actually very intelligent although she’s been told otherwise. Has a super good memory once she opens herself up to the world. Loves history, memorizes the weirdest facts, very knowledgeable about the world simply from reading and watching movies.
Outlook: She can never be free. Free is just a whisper in everyone’s hearts; it doesn’t exist, not truly. She can never change the way her life is, so she’s just accepted it.
Things said often: “I can’t”, “I’m too scared”
She likes: Freedom, traveling, history, facts, documentaries, biographies, tea, meeting people
mason
Childhood: Raised by his three aunts in the woods.
Dream: Program an AI that looks and acts like a real human.
Fears: Not having control over his life; being suppressed/told what to do.
Flaws: Blunt (so he sometimes seems uncaring); know-it-all
Strengths: Computers/robots/tech, being positive, helping other people, good at selling things, problem-solving
Outlook: Life is what you make of it. You can do anything you put your mind to, especially if you work hard enough. Tech is our key to a better future.
Things said often: “That’s unfortunate.”
He likes: Technology, coffee, card games, magic tricks, adventure, Blackbird by The Beatles
fawn
Childhood: {UNKNOWN}
Dream: To not live in fear. To be rich.
Fears: Being poor. Being mistreated.
Flaws: Terrible temper, controlling, bipolar, manipulator, cruel
Strengths: Good at convincing people, knows a lot about the mind (including Memory Jumping)
Outlook: Life is what you make of it. You can do anything you put your mind to, especially if you work hard enough. Tech is our key to a better future.
Things she says a lot: “I love you.” “It’s not wrong.”
Things she likes: Yoga/working out, being in charge
other characters
Buddy and Perkins — Fawn’s do-good, twin brother henchmen
Adam — Crown prince, thoughtful but an unfortunately consistent liar
Queen Elena — Motherly, open inventor and collector of robot butterflies
King Wesley — Stoic, cold, too busy ruler of post-America
Mr. Green — Leader of The Crucible, a rebel group attempting to overthrow the government
ACK AMANDA … sounds so good!! I REALLY REALLY WISH I COULD BETA READ IT!!! but I have quite a few other wips I’m beta reading *sigh* depends of when you need it 😀 so blackbird, lol. I can’t guarantee I can though.
Lisa
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Aw thanks girl!! You’re so sweet. 🙂 How long would it take do you think? I’m not in a huge hurry. I don’t know how long my beta readers will take. My plan right now is just to edit it myself while they’re looking over it and adjust as I go according to patterns I see in my readers’ comments.
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Oh I don’t know … see I’m beta reading three things this month alone, so I wouldn’t be free until February or March -_- Go on without me, but just remember that if you ever need a gamma reader HERE I AM!! 😀
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Haha I definitely will!!
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THIS BOOK SOUNDS SO AWESOME AMANDA LIKE EEEEEEEPPPP!!!
Also, I just wanted to know, what exactly is Beta Reading?
– Maddy | littlebitofsunshineweb.blogspot.com
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A beta reader is basically someone who test runs a book. 🙂 They read some of the first drafts and provide their feedback to make the book better.
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